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Thursday, August 1, 2013

Process Analysis - Clean Your Room

CLEAN YOUR ROOM


by TONY

             When you see your massive room, you will be embarrassed. If you do not know how to clean your room, it is meaningless repetition.

First, a window will be opened. To open the window is more important than anything. If there is no place where dust to get out, it is really hard to tidy up your room. Because the dust is so small and not visible, you must care about it though it is not spring cleaning. The fine dust can destroy the human bronchial tube.

Second, in order to clean the floor, every item will be tidied up on the table or bed. The stuff at the bottom moves to on the bed or table. It is the most important cleaning to organize things. As the stuff  is moved to the table, it is better arranged.

Third, Stockings worn out are needed to clean the room. It is helpful to gather dust under the bed. There is lots of dust hidden under the bed. It is important to collect the dust in hiding

Forth, wipe the floor. Wiping is helpful to remove the sticky things caused by moisture. After cleaning the room, you can feel fresh. Continue to wash. Rags is recommended.

Five, boxes are very good to get rid of useless or old stuff but it making. Require a drastic decision when you throw away old things.

           Cleaning is not difficult. You know how to clean now. Try your tidy up your room.

Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Compare & Contrast Essay: Visiting Japan may be dangerous.

Visiting Japan may be dangerous

 
by DongSeok
 

      2011.3.11. 2:46PM, you remember that a 9.0 magnitude earthquake hit the region in northeast Japan. For that reason, Japan was thrown into complete chaos by Tsunami. That made so many victims over fifty thousand. However that was not end. The natural disasters damaged the nuclear plant in Fukushima. It had let a nuclear crisis. Japanese exposured to radioactivity and the city became nothing. And now 2 years passed.
 
      Recently many people visit Japan for yen slack. I also planed to visit there for summer vacation. However, I decided not to visit Japan watching the video in the "Youtube" by chance. One radiation expert in Greenpeace says It's still a grave situation in Japan. Not people but also Foods are not free from this radiation.
   
      Now, I let you know the people planning to visit Japan how danger. I'm going to tell you first of all the radiation exposure in Japane. Next, the outcome and last, the symptom.
 
      There are reasons that visiting japan may be dangerous.
 
      First, The radiation covers the air in Japan more than the time the world war2 atom bomb on Japan, says professor Hiroaki Koida. It's more 500times danger than the atom bomb. In spite of this of this, Japan government is hiding the truth.
 
      Second, we can see deformed animals and plant in Japan after that time. For instance, mouse and cabbage are bigger comparing to the average. And rabbit without the ears. Lots of lives are born with reformed shape. People don't exceptional.
 
      Last, the pollution matters caused by radiation will accumulate in the body from eating and breathing. And also this accumulation into body is contagious having your baby.
 
      Someone may ask back this disaster was already 2 years passed. However, radiation is spending time hundreds of years until disappear. And also someone may say thet are only going for 2 or 3 days, so they're not worried. Then you should know few matters coming to our body goes on increasing and remain until we pass away.
 
      Like this the radiation is deadly harmful. And Japan is very extremely serious level of the radiation exposure. The Explosion of the nuclear plant in Russia in 1986 still bothers Russian so far. So you could remain for reasons mention above. I recommend that visiting Japan may be dangerous.


Compare & Contrast essay : Working Holiday.

Working Holiday
By Carl
 
        Many people in the world use a working holiday for studying other languages and traveling and experiencing another culture. A working holiday legaly allows a traveler to work in a nation and continually go on trips and experience culture. The most popular nation that allow working holidays is Australia. If you want to go abroad and are interested in another's culture, Make use of the working holiday in Australia. It has many advantages.
 
        People who use working holidays in Australia can legalily earn momey while traveling the nation. In contrast, going abroad to study allows less time to work than a working holiday. Also Australia pays more hourly than our nation. So, if you are going to have a working holiday in Australia, you will earn more money than only studying abroad.
 
        Besides, this people naturally experience another culture, while working someplace in Australia like a farm, coffee shop and resort. People can meet a lot of new peoples there. In addition, sometimes these people from different countries travel together. The experience is different from the studying in korea. It's a type of living studying.
 
        Finally people can easily get a working holiday visa from Australia. while, it is difficult to get a working holiday visa in other countries like canada, Germany, Ireland and The United Kingdom. On the other hand Australia's working holiday visa is unlimited. So, if you want, you can go there tomorrow.
 
        The benefits of working holiday in Australia are clear. If you are young, I recommaned you going abroad.
 

Descritive essay: Friday Night Gangnam Fever


Friday Night Gangnam Fever
by DongSeok
 
      Today is Friday and I greet Friday happily. I am waiting for it immediately. The dark night finally has embroidery of shining stars. I go out to the night city of Gangnam. The streets in Gangnam stimulate me with a song in my eardrums and a shining light dazzles my eyes.
 
      At 9:00PM, people who enjoy the night blow life into Friday night. They are everywhere like a flood, sprinkled with perfume fragrances and everyone is wearing nice clothes to express their individuality. There are many people in the pub eating spicy food and bitter alcoholic drinks. Serious faces are huddled together for the night. Their figures look like warriors before war. I am totally in a Serengeti grassland because I have decided tonight will be a best night.
 
      At 01:00AM, a man who is drunk looks for a beautiful woman with eyes red like a hyena. "Find! Oh! Beautiful lady, I am drunken by your sweet scent. Please let's be a together this night. I can't go to bed tonight, if you ignore my proposition." However, a woman rejects him with a cold smile and disappears into the deep darkness leaving just her shampoo smell. A cruel darkness whispers to the men, "DON'T GIVE UP GUYS!" I'm also still standing in the city on this lonely cruel night.
 
      At 05:00AM, the sun shows its face gradually. People avoid the brightness with distorted faces like Dracula. Some people are lying on the street like sticky slobs. But I don't worry about it because they will soon be alive and go away like Zombies. The streets are decorated with rubbish, Draculas and Zombies go far away to their final destinations. Finally the night which was dark, raw and terrible finishes. Then, I also go back to my lovely home.
    
     The passionate, horrible Friday night I can't avoid will soon come again and I will want to know where to find such a beautiful scarry thing. Suddenly, someone is crying, "Thank god for giving us friday night!"

Descritive Essay : Memorable Places of My Life


Memorable Places of My Life

                                                                                                                                                By Carl
 
        Everyone has a memorable place. Where is your place to remind your supreme memory? A Memorable place means a space that you don't forget because it made a unforgettable memory to you. My memorable place is Yang-su-ri in Yang-peong. I lived in Yang-su-ri for 3 years during high school. That place made me a beautiful memory for 3 years, In addition it had a special something
 
        While going to Yang-su-ri, you can see the Pal-dang dam. There is one lane roads in side of Pal-dang dam. As most people went through this road, They were writing the trace on wall in side of this road. So this road looks like not alone and happy. At the end of this road, there is the Yang-su-ri, it looks like a island. It is located between Namhangang and Bukhangang. So you can see the more water flow in everywhere at the Yang-su-ri. The water shone from the sun is as shiny as the star that was in middle of a darkness
 



        The Yang-su-ri is famous for a lot of reasons. If you go there in the morning, Sometimes you can see the dreamlike water fog that you can't see in anywhere. It looks like a alive Milky Way. Actually, people say that photographers want to take a picture there for it's special water fog picture. While going for a walk in the Yang-su-ri, sweat and cool smell attack your nose. This smell is lotus. There are many lotus swimming in the river. So sometimes Yang-su-ri has a lotus festival. That's why Yang-su-ri is famous from people.
 
        During high school in 3 years, I lived in dormitory at there. This school name is Yangseo high school near Yang seo station. it surrounded by only forest and sky. Contrary to city, I thought that Sky looked like a celling and forest looked like a wall. At that time when I failed the first love, I fought with my friend, I had grew up in there with natural and friend because we together lived in narrow room at dormitory for 3 years without electronic equipment. So, that's why Yang-su-ri is most memorable place for me
 
        If I will go back at the high school times, I still decide to go Yangseo high school at the yang-su-ri. During that time, I learned that life with nature and friends is beautiful thing. So Yang-su-ri is my second hometown

Compare & Contrast essay : Turn off your Air-conditioner

Turn off Your Air-conditioner
 
 
By Ben
 
 
 Nowadays, Korea is very hot, moggy. So, we don't want to go where it doesn't exist air-conditioner. We want cool, and fresh place in summer. In this sight, air-conditioner is very creative invention. But, actually, air-conditioner has a lot of problems. People need to turn off their air-conditioner. There are three reasons why we should turn off the air-conditioner.
 
 
 First, high cost of electronic fee which is caused by air-conditioner is waste of money. If we reduce to turn on air-conditioner for 1 hour, we can save 100,000 won at least. Furthermore,  the use of electricity of 1 air-conditioner is same as the use of 33.3 electric fans. Both air-conditioner and electric fan makes artificial winds. If you insist you must make indoor cool, I recommend you turn on electric fans, not air-conditioner.
 
 
 Second, turning on air-conditioner too much will makes national black out. Black out means lack of electricity amount in national level. Because of Korean weather, either company or family bought rapidly air-conditioner in 2011~2013. If we think 'It's Okay just one family turn on the air-conditioner.', Korea will experience black out. Actually, Korea experienced black out at last year.
 
 
 Third, air-conditioner is different from electric fan in environment sight. Because air conditioner releases some Freon gas while it is working, it is harmful to environment. Freon gas is the main reason of destroying ozone layer. If ozone layer disappears, glacier will be melted by direct ultraviolet lay. So, it will bring global warming. 
 
 
 In these reasons, I think we should turn off the air-conditioner. It has many negative points. It is not to remove air-conditioner. What I mean is ti reduce use of air-conditioner. Some of you already know this proverb. 'If you run after two hares, you will catch neither.' Don't change many things with just cool atmosphere. 

Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Descriptive Essay : My Favorite Vacation


My Favorite Vacation

By Jun  
        In a vacation, I always go to Cheonan the place I was born. I used to hop a train to go there, but today I often visit by subway. I think that it is as convenient as my own car because I can use the subway anytime.
  
         As soon as I reach my grandmother's house, I can see my cousins who play in a garden like trouble-makers. The garden consists of green, purple, and blue trees and flowers like a rainbow. Someone's perfume makes me imagine sweet cotton candy. A clear sky helps this place feel like a warm heaven. Then, my uncle comes to go to his home with me.
 
         Thirty minutes later, I arrive at my uncle's home. In front of me are two dogs who are barking as loudly as my mother's shouting. His home is recently built. Therefore, I start to help my auncle arrange things in his home. For example, I shovel up soil to cover holes in a waterway outside next to his house. This makes me wet and the sweat from my face falls down like heavy rain.
 
         In the evening, I prepare a barbecue party for supper. The roasted meat is aromatic and the fresh lettuces has clear dew which makes the table and scenery like Leonardo da Vinci's, 'The Last Supper.' Dogs eat delicious meat as fast as the running 'Usain Bolt' and the fumes of Soju let me imagine a dream place where I run on cloud.
 
        The next day, I prepare to go back home early. It's so sad to me but, English camp in KPU will open tomorrow. Therefore, I hop the train with my cousin who goes to Seoul to meet his friends. And hour later, I came home safely. But, my brother bothers me and makes me very, very, very annoyed. Though, this trip was fun and an exciting event in my life!